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Naruko gasped constantly lying in the garden of his house, while the twins, still jumping and running around the place as fresh as at the start, despite carrying two hours with exercise.

I think you should practice your speed and endurance before the byakugan Hinata smiled. We expected this result-Rest, I'll get the groceries for dinner-turned his gaze to the little they had taken the markers to play with each-Minato, Hizashi, join me.

- Yes mommy!

-Wait ... I can still ... still ...

But his voice was barely audible, it was still trying to normalize your breathing. Nor could rise. How could that pair of imps could still move?

Breast Changed land lie on your back relaxing your body, for a few moments looking at the sky remained clear with a blank mind until he remembered that he could not even paint one of the circles. It was so frustrating to think that their cousins, two years younger to her, were about to be recommended for the chunin exam, while she had just graduated from the academy, and now, I could not give a simple rayon four siblings years. What event was the only family that stood in nothing? And that he was not thinking of the children of his uncle Neji or his brother.

His breathing was quick too standardized and if I tried, I could probably get up, but he did not, because his mind could only think of their failures. Beginning to believe that neither the ninjutsu or taijutsu were his own: once thought to specialize in medical jutsu or genjutsu, but definitely did not have enough chakra to control medicine and in terms of genjutsu ... It was a miracle having achieved the basic jutsus, as it tried new illusions, she was the one who fell on them instead of your opponent. Besides, she really wanted kick butt as he had heard from his father.

- I'll kill anyone who returns to mock that!

Pouted while hitting with hands and feet the ground. It was a strange combination of tantrum and discomfort, all directed toward a specific person, who did not want to know his name at that time. Of only imagine his sly face, he came anger.

He sighed and forgot the mocking voice echoing in his head. What bothered him was hardly less than their cousins ​​or siblings rather frustrated him not measuring up as the daughter of Hokage, and mainly, though she would not admit it openly, one of the reasons why I wanted to highlight as kunoichi, was to draw the attention of someone special, someone who would look if it was only as strong as Kikime, the daughter of the Kazekage, or Sayaka, a girl from the village.

- What's he doing?

I thought in the absence of a month of that special someone, when his meditation was interrupted by the call to the front door of the house. He jumped up and despite an imbalance, ran to open.

-Hello Naruko-chan-Tsubaki greeted with a nice smile to be received-Good morning.

'Hello,' said reluctantly, or so good-the interrogancia noticed the blonde-not Ask Why are you here?

-I was wondering if you would not mind accompanying me to train with Sakura-san, the girl replied with warmth in his words, promised to teach me to use the super strength and thought it might interest you.

- What a great idea! I have not tried that! The redhead exclaimed changing your mood by enthusiasm, still had options to try. Some thought about a certain person came to mind appeasing their minds at once-no, better not, is another day.

- Are you by Kiku-kun?

'No ... no, do not be silly How will it be for him? -Laughed looked away nervously as-is that ... no one at home who can tell.

-Hi-Hinata Tsubaki-chan arrived with bags in their hands in their small-company How are you?

Lady Hinata-Good afternoon. Very well, thank you, the blonde bowed helped with the bags.

-Thank you. Naruko, help me too, smiled at the guest-What did they say to tell someone?

Tsubaki-Only invited me to train with her and Sakura Uzumaki-san spoke before teammate would say 'But you and I were training.

The explanation was made as the group walked into the house to the kitchen. Small had already come and gone since maintained their game with markers.

'We're done for today, so do not worry, you can go, encouraged Hinata seeing their bags were left on the kitchen counter by teens-only returns to the dinner. You are invited Tsubaki-chan.

'But Mom ...

-Thanks Lady Hinata-the blonde took the hand of the girl next to him and follow-influenced Let Naruko!

'They've sent the appropriate notices with our fastest shinobi, each with a copy of the portrait-reported to Hokage-Neji has also distributed the picture with all the ninjas of the village-looked the picture again after a few seconds of silence - this woman looks familiar from somewhere.

- You too? Tell me if you remember where, Shikamaru says recognize, but can not remember exactly.

'Sorry, no.

-This is the last straw How is that possible? Naruto asked in frustration And to top it off, that damn Koichi ... 'He paused and turned his gaze to Hyuuga Neji?-I can ask you a favor?

- What's it about? -Naruto nodded to ojiperla to come closer. Hyuuga obeyed and the blond whispered a few words in his ear I see ...

I need the utmost discretion. I do not want anyone to know that you're out of the village, begging the blonde still whispers-Spend first, and tell your wife, if it takes, she will cover for you.

'All right. I will leave everything as ready-made obeisance to Kage-Say hello to Hinata-sama and children.

Both Kangofu Uzumaki as they walked through the streets of Konoha in silence. The redhead soothed their walk with each step seemed increasingly alarmed by shortening the distance to your destination.

The blonde had perceived that his companion stayed behind, but it was not until I turned the last corner of his way he stopped to wait. If she was not willing to talk, then it would be the blonde who did.

- Do you know? You should let him tell you to finish this once.

-No, I do not know how ... what? -Be exalted-What do you mean? Who do I have to say?

Naruko's cheeks were tinted with carmine, making stealth attempt was weaker than it already was.

-Let's Naruko-chan, you know what I mean-Tsubaki spoke calmly and warmth, consideration should have him Kiku-kun.

He ...

- Consider me for what?

He questioned the question which was three feet of girls and did not have much of arriving.

As recognized the voice of the newcomer, the redhead greatly tensed, besides having risen, much like his mother, the redness in his face.

Good afternoon-Kiku-Tsubaki-kun patted her friend's back and ran adolescents being confused-I will go home from Sakura-san.

- Wait Tsubaki!

Uzumaki was preparing to run in the scope of her friend, however, the pelirrosado reached her arm, caused by the sudden arrest the boy, urged that crashed into the chest Naruko Kiku.

'Sorry,' asked the young man, are you okay? -She looked up nodding Naruko-chan, there's something important I have to tell you ...

-Yes, I interrupted, do not guess what Dad promised me? The boy refused disengaged-I learn to use the Rasengan!

He broke the grip of ojinegro enthusiastically to the news and quickly explained the how he got such a promise. For the latest, added much detail, but many of those who did, were invented, his intention was to forget what the caller wanted to say.

-That good news.

'I know you believe it? Muttered after seeing the smile of his interlocutor-I can not wait for the weekend!

-At least you know it will bequeath He paused and put his steps to ojiperla-Naruko-chan ... long ago ...

-I say then, almost forgot to Tsubaki-took the youth of the wrist and pulled him to follow running-We have to catch up!

Naruko gathered all his strength to run and carry to Kiku, should run without stopping until you reach the house of marriage Enogu. He heard the boy ordered to stop, but when she felt the intention of stopping him, dropped the extremity to which he clung until he collided with Sai, who recently left the home.

-Good afternoon.

- Why did you get into my cami ...? -He called Uzumaki, to realize the identity of the person-Bue ... good afternoon ...

- What?

Sakura, with his small and Tsubaki, came to hear the claim of adolescent afternoons seconds, the eldest son of the painter, came to the site on foot, looking confused scene.

'Nothing, nothing has happened,' said the dark-haired sweetheart-See you later.

Sai was dismissed with a wave of his hand and headed to their destination faster. Sakura, on the other hand, received his visitors with kindness and joy, however, he found it unusual the idea of ​​seeing the daughter of his former teammate as his student.

-Since you are beginner, begin with a very simple exercise, the women turned to higher-Kiku-kun, help me with one of the two.

- Yes!

- And to my mom who will help me? Hanako-questioned pulling the skirt of pelirrosada-I already am a kunoichi.

Certainly my life-stirring black hair smiled the girl-From today you're a kunoichi. I will instruct sky.

- It's true! Today started classes at the academy-enunciated Naruko-Congratulations Hanako-chan.

-Sakura-san, I would like you to instruct me-intervened Tsubaki watching his redheaded companion wanted to object-Naruko-chan is very eager to instruct her and the Hanako-chan while.

'You're right muttered under his most-son Do you agree?

-If Mom, I do.

-But ...

'Well, then let's begin.

'But here Sakura-san?

-For now suffice garden will be something simple, 'said the blonde doubt-When things start to break we'll go to training camps.

Sai's wife trained his students, including his eldest son, in line to observe the first exercise. So as I said it, it was something simple: push a tree, no matter even at that time and could not move. But, as expected, Uzumaki was the first object at the first opportunity.

-Trees within the village are so thick even grumbled the girl pushed Los'll pull effortlessly.

- Really? Why not try?

Smiled the pelirrosada with arms crossed. Undoubtedly, this girl was the daughter of Naruto Uzumaki, since not only felt in his character, but in the way complaints and conducting gestures to pout. For Sakura, was as briefly traced the old days.

- Of course I will!

Exclaimed enthusiastically and going hastily up the nearest tree. Just stayed within range, the redhead threw a strong kick against the trunk of a tree about eight inches in diameter.

The tree moved by the impact even thundered, but after swinging few seconds, it stopped being stopped with just a scratch in the area of ​​stroke; desperate, the girl gave several tied to poor tree until finally tired. When stopping, jumping Naruko soon holding his leg and moaning in pain. Kiku soon close to her aid.

- See? So you start with the simple-Sakura rolled her eyes and went to relieve the pain of lower-strength is gained little by little.

-What you need to do is push the tree with both hands and with all your strength, the man explained as he held Naruko-Before you have the strength, you have to master the one we have.

- How we master this exercise our strength with Sakura-san?

-Knowing much is your maximum and minimum how you answered the question of Tsubaki as she finished relieving pain Uzumaki-At the same time, your strength will increase and you will feel yourself hand-foot removed the redhead- Moreover, this is only the first step.

Naruko noticed that despite having been without pain, Kiku still held and after blushing, was let go and walked away a few steps.

Again-what of "a technique takes time," muttered the ojiperla with pout-I hate it!

-So it is with everything. Your father took his work and time to get where you are, 'said Sakura-If everything was easy, no one would appreciate what you get-Uzumaki arms folded Well! Why can not we?

Everyone nodded except Naruko, he still seemed worse and worse for her and almost forgot that their instructor would be one pelirrosado. He tried to stay very close to the other to avoid that moment alone he insisted.

-

Shikamaru was in the company of four characters with their faces covered, all belonging to the most loyal subordinates old Koichi. The group walked down a long corridor of what looked like an abandoned building. They came to a gate where each side had a guard with the same spruces that co-Nara. He knocked on the door.

- Get out! He heard a female voice for a moment brought to mind the picture I had seen in the last meeting, I'm not in the mood!

-How troublesome muttered, scratching his neck-I come from the Hokage.

The door opened, but no one appeared. Shikamaru and his escort entered the site, whose contrast was noticeable outside. The place looked like a humble house, but comfortable. Nothing to do with the environment outside dungeon.

- What do you want?

-Calm down, just come to bring you some news-with one hand the redhead asked to sit down. Soon to ignore and with a gesture invited him to imitate 'Thank pulled out his pack of cigarettes, got one on the lips and offered to the female, who was to respond with rudeness, but the chestnut was forward- Come on, you will relax.

Karin was resuming his claim, but he noticed a piece of paper strategically placed on one of the cigarettes, so that only she could see. He bent to pick it up and turned it on.

-Chunin exams begin in a couple of weeks ...

-I already know ... He took a puff on his cigarette and started coughing, it was the first time I did that, 'This is not for me.

She got up and turned off the snuff in a small kitchen tiles, then put the leftovers to the trash as he often did with their cigarette butts away when she allowed his vice, which is rare.

-No'd thrown or woman, are expensive.

-For me, come and get it out of the trash.

The redhead returned to the seat while Shikamaru showed his laziness at the thought of getting up.

-If you have nothing else to say get out, I told you I'm not in the mood.

A few days ago a group called Daidai appeared, they seek to possess bijuus and information on everything that happened in the fourth war and about stay-puffed his cigar and blew the smoke-Have you heard of them? If you have all that information is likely to meet. We only know that one of its members is called Rika-spread a sheet in his hand since his arrival and showed him the portrait-Remember to give us any information you have or ...

'I know, but he had never seen in my life, but I know where you could find information replied with folded arms, but I have one condition, raised an eyebrow Nara want a new mattress, which I have killed me back.

'I will comment, but tell me ...

-You know my rules, sharing the same day.

'All right, back tomorrow with news-rose from his chair, for he knew the stubbornness of women in front of him, was not the first time he suffered such conditions-This may cancel exams.

-My back can be expected if canceled.

Good-bye.

Shikamaru smiled at the comment and left with his escort. Now he knew the truth, in which she had been involved, included many of the attacks that the woman used to guide you.

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An apology for the delay and it was slightly short chapter, I promise to take less and do the next chapter in the extension of the first two.

As for the drawings, I made to leave the page links but the truncated me. If you want to see them, I recommend you write in gogle "devianart sasukarinsui" or "The Adventures of devianart Uzumaki" and can enter the first option. I'm with the same nick and there are both the fic, as clarification, my comments and of course, the pictures.

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No he visto muchos animes en mi vida y pocos son los mangas que he leído, sin embargo, me encanta Naruto y Naruto Shippuden, razón por la cual inicié a escribir fanfics, mis parejas favoritas son:

Naruto/NarutoShippude: SasuKarin SuiKa NaruHina InoSai ShikaIno ShikaTema NejiTen SasoSaku ItaKona PeinKonan KakaAnko NejiHina.

Odio con todo mi ser a Sakura Haruno y con el único que puedo verla sin molestarme es con Sasori y no sé el por qué, aunque recientemente he aceptado el SakuDei y el SakuKarin. Aunque al parecer no siento lo mismo con la Sakura de "la otra dimensión", la del capítulo 271 del shippuden. Pese a mi desprecio por el personaje, en mis fanfics procuro no modificar su personalidad ni hacer bashing con ella, pues pienso que le quita interés a la historia, aunque claro, la mayoría de mis fics son dramáticos, así que tanto ella como otros personajes, terminan sufriendo en mis escritos.

Death Note: LigthMisa LMisa

Shaman King: AnnaYoh AnnaHao RenTamao PilikaHorohoro JunLee RenJun HanaTamao

Me encantan los triángulos amorosos/tríos y mi favorito sin duda es el de SasukeKarinSuigetsu, pero también uno que amo es el YohAnnaHao.

Tengo afición por el lemmon y el limmen y también me encanta la idea del insesto. No tengo mucho interés en el yaoi, aunque recientemente me ha nacido algo en algunos personajes de un fanfic colectivo, en cuanto al yuri, el gusto si lo tengo, pero no es mucho y es reciente.

Pese a mis gustos por las parejas, ya sea por retos o por cumplir peticiones de algunas personas, me he aventurado a escribir sobre parejas diversas, incluyendo las que no me gustan y aquellas que no se me habían ocurrido antes, así que les aseguro que mi lista de escritos tiene para varios gustos.

Dejo aquí el link correspondiente a mi página de facebook para aquellos que deseen comunicarse conmigo, advierto que no siempre reviso el inbox de ff.net, por ello les recomendaría entrar al link que les dejo:

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I have not seen many animes in my life and few manga I've read, however, I love Naruto and Naruto Shippuden, which is why I started writing fanfics, my favorite couples are:

Naruto / NarutoShippude: Suika SasuKarin ShikaTema NejiTen ShikaIno NaruHina InoSai SasoSaku ItaKona PeinKonan KakaAnko NejiHina.

I hate with all my being to Sakura Haruno and the only thing I can see it is not bothering with Sasori and do not know why, but I recently accepted the SakuDei and SakuKarin. Although apparently not feel the same with the Sakura from "the other dimension", the Chapter 271 of shippuden. Despite my disdain for the character in my fanfics try not to change your personality or do bashing with it, because I think that takes away interest to the story, but of course, most of my fics are dramatic, so she and other characters , end up suffering in my writings.

Death Note: LigthMisa LMisa

Shaman King: AnnaYoh AnnaHao RenTamao PilikaHorohoro JunLee RenJun HanaTamao

I love love triangles / trios and certainly my favorite is to SasukeKarinSuigetsu, but also one that I love is the YohAnnaHao.

I have love for the lemmon and limmen and I also love the idea of ​​insesto. I have little interest in yaoi, but recently something I was born in some characters in a fanfic collective regarding yuri, if I have a taste, but not much and is recent.

Despite my tastes for couples, either challenges or meet requests from some people, I have ventured to write about different couples, including those that do not like and those that had not occurred to me before, so I assure you My list has written for various tastes.

My page in facebook ---> Dejo aquí el link correspondiente a mi página de facebook para aquellos que deseen comunicarse conmigo, advierto que no siempre reviso el inbox de ff.net, por ello les recomendaría entrar al link que les dejo:

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Anuncio, a cualquier interesado, que puede comunicarse conmigo sobre el fic por facebook:

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uzumaki rules maniwis n.n
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Peculiar clan n_n
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Y muy divertido por cierto.
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Mood: Joy ~skykun Dec 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Hey
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Mood: Joy ~skykun Dec 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Did you check out my Naruto comic?
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Mood: Joy ~skykun Nov 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Taking request?
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